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The deep (August 2026)

In the text “Saving our Oceans: Code Blue” (www.time.com, 23 September 2010), one sentence goes:

“In her more than 50-year career in ocean science, Earle has studied the deep, dived it and written about it.”

In German translation: “In ihrer über 50-jährigen Karriere im Bereich Meereskunde hat Earle die Tiefe erkundet, ist hindurch getaucht und hat über ihre Erfahrungen geschrieben.”

Now, “die Tiefe zu erkunden” (to explore the deep) and “durch sie hindurchzutauchen” (to dive it) amounts to the same thing. The English original, however, suggests a contrast, here, between theory (“studied”) and practice (“dived”).

The following translation accounts for this contrast: In ihrer über 50-jährigen Karriere im Bereich Meereskunde hat Earle sich wissenschaftlich mit der Tiefe auseinandergesetzt, sie tauchend erkundet und über ihre Erfahrungen geschrieben.